Refine Your Poems. Strengthen Your Submissions.
As a poet with 170+ publications in literary journals including Rattle, Poet Lore, Modern Haiku, Frogpond, and The Normal School, I offer specialized feedback to help your work reach its full potential. My poems have been anthologized four times and nominated for Best of the Net. I also hold an Advanced Certificate in Tutoring from Berkeley City College, where I work as a Writing Tutor.
Whether you're working on individual poems, preparing a submission packet, or developing a full manuscript, I provide detailed, actionable guidance on craft, imagery, sound, form, and revision strategy.
Poetry Editing Services
Individual Poem Edit
$45 per poem (up to 30 lines)
Detailed line-by-line feedback addressing:
Word choice, imagery, and sound
Rhythm, lineation, and formal elements
Specific revision suggestions
Brief written overview
Typical turnaround: 5-7 days
Submission Packet Review
$160 for 3-5 poems
Everything in Individual Poem Edit, plus:
Guidance on poem selection and ordering
Assessment of the packet's cohesion and voice
Strategic recommendations for target journals
Typical turnaround: 7-10 days
Haiku & Japanese Short Forms
$120 for 10 haiku/tanka
Specialized feedback for haiku, tanka, and related forms, including:
Analysis of seasonal reference, juxtaposition, and compression
Technical guidance on form and tradition
Revision suggestions with rationale
Journal submission recommendations
My haiku appear regularly in Modern Haiku, Frogpond, Acorn, and other leading journals.
Typical turnaround: 7-10 days
Manuscript Consultation
$450 for chapbook (20-30 pages)
$750 for full manuscript (48-64 pages)
Comprehensive feedback including:
2-3 page editorial letter addressing themes, structure, and individual poem strengths
Detailed comments on 5-8 selected poems to illustrate revision priorities
Guidance on sequencing, title, and overall manuscript vision
Optional 30-minute follow-up call to discuss feedback
Typical turnaround: 2-3 weeks
Hourly Consultation
$65 per hour
One-on-one session via video call for:
Real-time feedback on poems
Submission strategy discussion
Craft questions and revision guidance
Journal recommendations based on your work
Flexible scheduling
How It Works
1. Contact me using the form below with:
Type of service you're interested in
Brief description of your project
Any specific goals or questions
2. I'll respond within 24-48 hours to confirm availability and timeline
3. Submit your work via email after payment
4. Receive detailed feedback within the specified timeframe
Ready to Elevate Your Poetry?
Contact Me for a Free 15-Minute Consultation:
Please fill out the form below with details about your project (e.g., type of service desired, poem/manuscript length, your primary goals), and I'll be in touch to schedule a brief introductory call.